Hey, remember what I said earlier about a page with more than one panel meaning that material which was supposed to be spread across several panels?  Well, that’s only partially true here.  By this point in the writing process, I’d already started condensing ideas down, so technically speaking, I never actually wrote out earlier drafts than the one this is directly based on.  But still, I wish stuff like this could have had more room to breathe instead of just all happening on a single page all at once.