page 33 – The Continuing Strange Story of Avatar, Part 2
Original note – Mar 28, 2008
Well, if she’s designed to function more naturally in space than on a planet, why NOT kick her out an airlock?
The layout of the page didn’t turn out right at all. The bottom left panel, which is the THIRD, shouldn’t be lower than the middle right panel, which is the FORTH. I hoped having the speech bubble on top would help navigate the reader in the right direction, but I think it actually makes things worse. Well, at least the first panel turned out better than I expected.
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