Page 383 – CLEARLY NOT GOING TO BE IMPORTANT LATER
Part of me thought about giving Megaweapon some kind of inner monologue here, just to liven up the page a bit, but it just seemed… wrong. Megaweapon clearly takes after his brother, in that he’s not a very eloquent scamp. I DO wish I’d managed to make that label on the box more legible. WHY MUST MY HANDWRITING SUCK SO?
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(Historical Notes: OOOOoooh, THIS sure came back in a big way down the line, didn’t it? Life-affirming proof that, eventually all these recurring plot points CAN pay off!)
Most unimportant Nitpick Ever: You forgot to italicize the Historical Notes.
THERE ARE NO UNIMPORTANT NITPICKS.