page 1471 – Very Large Skyscrapers
Trigger has complained about this exact same issue, ya know.
But seriously, I am VERY surprised at just how much of an artistic challenge it’s proven to convincingly express a proper sense of cramped claustrophobia in these recent pages. I’ll be just as relieved as Marshal when everybody disembarks.
Anyway, page 1472 is already half-way though editing as I post this! Huzzah!
You didn’t have Layla’s chest pressed right up against both Trigger and Marshall. So I have to say that you failed to make it as cramped as you should have.
Also, we now know a part of Marshall’s type, and they have skyscrapers.