page 43 – The Anatomy Of The Foot In Mouth
Original note – April 25, 2008
Finally, a page that’s %100 driven by writing rather than the need to establish what’s in that room over there. Sorry again for letting the tour sequence drag out so long. It shan’t happen again!
(Historical Note: I said it before, I’ll say it again. HA HA HA HA HA.)
Anyway, this is the first page in a while that I’ve really been pleased with. The speech balloons are a little out of whack in the second panel, but other than that, it turned out quite nicely.
One odd thing, though: I have no idea why Cap’n Crosby didn’t hook Trigger and Layla up with rooms right away. He should have done that before they even took off, right? Maybe the frat-bots mentioned on page 37 trashed all the empty quarters and there’s only now some clean enough to use… Yeah, why not?
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