page 1109 – second breakfast
(Historical Notes: Okay, that earlier page was justifiable in that we needed to re-establish where these characters were. Even if they weren’t really doing much of anything, it was excusable as a bit of house-keeping. But this? This is just filler. This is a thirty-second shot of a car parking and a character getting out and walking across the parking lot before a scene that could just as easily have started the moment said character walked in the door. We could easily drop this page and lose absolutely nothing. Was Past Me really busy this week and felt obligated to crank out some pointless filler to cover for it? Was this around the church Easter production or something? I honestly can’t remember at this point. I both wish the Wayback Machine had a capture of the original commentary but at the same time don’t even wanna hear it from Past Me anymore. The point is, whatever excuse Past Me may have had, and good editor would have cut this page entirely.)
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