page 687 – meanwhile, upstairs
Okay, the good news is that it looks like the rest of this week’s information has been restored, so all of Tuesday’s comments are back! The BAD news, thought, is it looks like the past few hours of information were lost in the trade, so I’m having to put THIS page up a second time. On the whole, it’s a fair trade, but if you commented on this page in that window of time, I’m afraid it’s lost to the mists of the Internet. D’OH!
And speaking of things list (but that SHOULD be) there’s a new Voting Incentive that… ugh, just observe…
(Historical Notes: Man, Past Me spent so much time complaining about SmackJeeves that there’s nothing here about the actual page. I was trying to go for a bit of physical comedy with Skye twisting herself around all these tubes and stuff, but most of that got lost between me struggling with perspective and anatomy as well all those speech bubbles. Those bubbles really infuriated me this second time around, because I REALLY wanted to move some of them around to make the order less confusing. Those last two lines in the second panel shouldn’t be lower on the page than dialog in the third panel/silhouettes, and there’s enough space in panel two that they COULD easily have been placed higher up. Alas, trying to copy/paste the speech bubbles with so much other stuff around them just would have been too messy and time consuming. Yet another reason why the interiors on board The Exposition are basically plain white voids.)
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